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Alankria - January 10th, 2008
trailing words from her fingers in streaks across the brick walls
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you're the queen of all the surface streets, I'm the wiener boy that you're here to meet
Writing poetry is a peculiar thing for me, because I cannot explain half or maybe even more of the decisions I make while writing it. Line breaks, word choice, line-length, sounds -- I'm running almost purely on instinct, a sense of This works or Nope, need to change it.

Compare this to writing fiction, where I can probably explain about 90% of what I'm doing. (Word choice and sentence structure, especially where related to what I perceive as the rhythm of the prose, I do part on instinct and part on knowing that, for instance, you don't do three sentences in a row that start with the same word and have similar lengths (unless you're going for a particular effect)). I can come up with logic for most of what I'm doing. Poetry? Not so much.

This is going to be problematic when it comes to learning how to get better. At the moment I'm trying to read more poetry, as that's how I learnt (and still learn) a lot of my writing craft skills. I also have links somewhere to written tutorials on poetry-writing, which I will check out sometime.

(If you want to read more poetry, why not wander on over to the latest issue of Goblin Fruit.)

In some sense, though, this muddling forward is quite fun. And certainly rewarding when I come up with something that I think works. (About half of it, maybe more, doesn't. Maybe I'll be able to fix them when I'm better at this.)

Wrote a 10-line little'un today. I think it works.

Onwards I go.

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Masterfade
You took my hand and led me down to watch a papillon parade, and
we let the kittens lick our hair and drink our chalky lemonade.
You squeezed my hand and told me softly that I shouldn't be afraid
'cause all the while your finger's resting gently on the masterfade,
the masterfade.
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